First Chapter Critique
Flat Rate of $35
Hook Your Reader From the First Page!
Your first chapter has one job: grab your reader and never let go.
But hitting the right mix of character connection, world immersion, and momentum? That’s not always easy — and that’s where I come in. My First Chapter Critique is built to help you shape an irresistible opening that pulls readers into your world from the very first page. You’ll get expert, encouraging feedback focused on strengthening the core layers of your scene — because powerful stories are built one intentional layer at a time.
This service includes:
• Inline comments that show you exactly what’s working — and what needs fine-tuning
• A detailed editorial letter packed with insights and next steps
• A light introduction to my Stories in Layers approach, helping you create an opening that feels deep, dynamic, and unforgettable
What You Get
Type of Feedback
• Character development
• Worldbuilding
• Immersion
• Reader connection
• Pacing
• Word usage and sentence structure
• Dialogue
Editing Resources (Where Applicable)
Because every story — and every writer — needs something a little different, I tailor the support materials you receive. Based on your manuscript’s needs, you may also get:
• Show vs tell techniques and tools for info dumping.
• Tools for head hopping and tense issues.
• Tools for worldbuilding and magic systems.
Constant Contact & Support
Editing can feel intimidating — but you won’t be doing this alone.
• I will be available to you before, during, and after the edit to ensure 100% satisfaction.
• During typical business hours, I respond to emails within a few hours. Outside of business hours, I respond within 24 hours.
• I send out progress updates to clients every 2-3 days to keep in touch & ensure comfort during the hard process of waiting for feedback.
Deliverables
• A copy of your document with marginal notes, questions, and suggestions
• An editorial letter with notes, suggestions, and resources to help guide you through your next round of revisions
Hear From Past Clients
”
Tessy continues to be a joy to work with. Her reader report was exhaustively thorough, she absolutely devoured the revised chapter I’d sent. I wish every reader report was as in-depth and well-constructed as the ones she provides.
— M. Swinnerton
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Thank you so much for the very specific ways to improve my first chapter!!! I will use every single suggestion.
— Catie John
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Fantastic experience! [She] provided a very detailed reader report that pointed out strengths and flaws, helping me understand what needed some polishing and what was good to go. I wouldn’t hesitate at all to reach out again on future books. I highly recommend [her] to anyone.