Developmental Editing Services Designed to Deepen Your Story, Not Diminish Your Voice
You’ve crafted a story full of heart, imagination, and meaning — and now it’s time to shape it into its strongest, truest form.
At Cardinal Creative Press, I specialize in collaborative, personalized editing for fantasy, sci-fi, and romance authors, using my signature Stories in Layers method to help you refine, strengthen, and elevate every part of your manuscript — while honoring your voice and your vision.
Whether you’re revising a messy first draft or wrestling with a story that just isn’t clicking, I’m here to help you bring out the best in your story.
Not sure which service is right for you? Contact me to get more info.
Explore My Editing Services
Each of my services is designed with my Stories in Layers approach at its heart — focusing on the depth, structure, pacing, and emotions that make stories unforgettable.
Manuscript Evaluation
A comprehensive, big-picture editorial service tailored to your story’s unique needs. You’ll receive actionable feedback on character arcs, plot structure, pacing, worldbuilding, theme, and more, along with clear next steps for revision.
First Chapter Critique
First impressions matter. This focused critique strengthens the foundation of your novel by analyzing your opening chapter for a strong hook, character connection, pacing, clarity, and genre expectations — so you can move forward with confidence.
Why Work With Me?
Hi, I’m Tessy — editor, author, and the creator of the Stories in Layers editing method.
I believe editing should feel like an empowering collaboration, not a cold critique.
When we work together, my goal is to help you uncover the strongest version of your story, the one that resonates deeply with readers and feels undeniably yours.
Here’s what sets me apart:
• Extensive Training & Experience
I’ve completed multiple courses in developmental editing, proofreading, and creative writing, and I’ve been editing professionally since 2021. I continue to study and refine my skills to better serve my clients.
• A Sharp Eye for Both the Big Picture and the Small Details
I help you spot structural weaknesses, pacing issues, character inconsistencies — and those tiny details that can quietly elevate (or undermine) your story’s impact.
•A Collaborative, Personalized Approach
Every story (and every author) is different. That’s why I tailor every edit to your manuscript’s needs and your creative goals, maintaining open communication and supporting your vision every step of the way.
•A Thorough, Encouraging Feedback Style
As an author myself, I know how vulnerable sharing your work can feel. I strive to deliver feedback that’s honest, actionable, and uplifting — helping you move forward with clarity and confidence.
Editorial contracts will be provided once we decide we’re the right fit for each other. A non-refundable 25% deposit is required at the time of booking. If you need to reschedule, please notify me 15 days in advance. The deposit will transfer to the new booking date.
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Ready to Strengthen Your Story?
Whether you’re ready to get started or you have questions about my services, I’d love to hear from you!
Every project begins with a free sample edit and a custom quote — no pressure, just a chance to see if we’re the right fit.
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